四级写作解析2: 帮助新生适应新环境
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12月四级考试写作解析：（三）
Directions: 写作要求：
根据以上提示该写作要求的是写一篇有关组织演讲比赛活动的建议书，内容包括活动题目、活动目的、举办程序及选手的评选等。时间30分钟，字数介于120-180间。
参考范文：
To whom it may concern,
致有关人员：
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to make a proposal for the upcoming speech contest. The detailed information about this event will be listed in the following.
在此我代表学生会为即将举行的演讲比赛发表有关建议。有关建议的具体内容如下：
First, I suggest that the contest should be held in the school auditorium at 7 p.m. next Friday. As for the speech topic, "living a healthy lifestyle" would be a good choice, since this subject can draw students’ attention to some social phenomena, such as addiction to computer games. Secondly, the contest will be an English one, which aims to arouse college students’ learning passion for English. As for procedure, it will consist of two rounds of speeches, and all the participants need to submit their speech draft in advance. The planned number of the contestants is 20 and students from every department are qualified to sign up. Finally, the committee is to invite professional teachers to score and some students to form a panel of judges to rate the contestants comprehensively as well. In this way, the best ten contestants can be selected wisely.
首先，我提议该演讲比赛应当在下周五晚上7点举行在学习大礼堂举行。“以健康方式生活”可以是一个很好的演讲题目，它能把同学们的注意力吸引到比如对电脑游戏上瘾等某些社会现象与问题上。其次，演讲比赛将会是用英语举行，其目标之一是唤醒大学生对英语学习的热情。再次，关于比赛程序，有两轮演讲，所有演讲者都要提前提交演讲稿。计划的参赛选手人数是从各院系报名选拔的20人。最后一点，组委会会邀请专业老师打分并组织部分学生组成评委席来给参赛选手综合评价。唯有如此，我们才能睿智选出最佳演讲选手来。
I believe this school-wide event will be successfully held and inspire all the students on campus. I am looking forward to your feedback.
相信这次全校范围的演讲比赛活动会圆满举办并给所有同学极大的激发作用。期待着大家的反馈信息。
Best Wishes
Bill
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12月四级考试写作解析：（一）
Directions: Suppose your school is organizing an orientation program to help the freshmen adapt to the new environment and academic studies. You are now to write a proposal, which may include its aim, duration, participants and activities. You will have 30 minutes to write the proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
写作要求解析：根据以上提示该作文需要的是一篇倡议书或者建议书，其他要求明确无误。
参考范文：
To whom it may concern,
致相关人员：
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to make a proposal for the orientation program. In order to help the freshmen adapt to the new environment and academic studies, I suggest that the program should start at the beginning of the new semester and last for one week.
在此谨代表学生会我写了一个针对新生培训的项目建议书。为帮助广大新生较快适应新的环境与学习生活，我建议该项目开始于本学期初，为期一周。
To be specific, the program will initiate on September 10, . Besides the principals, deans and faculties of every department, all the newly enrolled freshmen are in the invitation list. To assist newcomers to understand the university life in advance, the following activities will be organized. Firstly, a host will introduce the layout of the school enviroment, presenting the exact location and function of every building in a concise expression style. Secondly, the dean of each department will introduce certain required courses for different majors, and explain the level that students should achieve in academic performance. On the occasion, there will be volunteers guiding new students and distributing souvenirs on campus.
具体而言，项目将始于9月10日。所有注册新生以及各校长、各院系主任及教师都在受邀名列。为协助新生们提前熟悉我们大学，需要组织有关活动。首先，由主持人介绍学校环境总体布局、简明扼要呈现每座大楼的具体位置与赋予功能。其次，由各院系主任介绍不同专业的所修课程及需要达到的学术水平。培训期间，会有志愿者在校园中引导新生并分发纪念品。
I believe this school-wide event will be successfully held and surely help all the freshmen blend into our community immediately.
我相信这个全校范围的活动将会圆满举行，希望它助所有新生尽快融入我们大集体中。
Best Wishes,
Bob
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12月四级翻译解析（二）
（1）坎儿井(Karez)是新疆干旱地区的一种水利系统，由地下渠道将水井连接而成。 （2）该系统将春夏季节渗入(seep into)地下的大量雨水及积雪融水收集起来，通过山体的自然坡度引到地面，用于灌溉农田和满足人们的日常用水需求。 （3）坎儿井減少了水在地面的蒸发(evaporation)，对地表破坏很小，因而有效地保护了自然资源与生态环境。 （4）坎儿井体现了我国人民与自然和谐共存的智慧，是对人类文明的一大贡献。
原文解析：全段总共也是四句话，主要内容是对新疆坎儿井的总体介绍，包括它的概念外延、运行原理、生态功能、文明地位。
网络版普遍参考译文：
Karez is a water conservancy system in the arid area of Xinjiang, in which wells are connected by underground channels. The system collects vast amounts of rainwater and melted snow water that seep into the ground in spring and summer, and draws the water to the ground through the natural slope of the mountain to irrigate farmland and meet people's daily needs. Karez reduces the evaporation of water on the ground and does little damage to the ground, effectively protecting the natural resources and ecological environment. Karez embodies the wisdom of the harmonious coexistence between people and nature, which is a great contribution to human civilization.
翻译解析：
对以上网络版译文从个人角度看如果只是公布一下答案还尚可，浅尝辄止于预估分值固然好，考后深入分析、来个及时总结、把做过的重难点题目在头脑中重新回味琢磨一番也未尝不是益事一件。答案不是唯一的，毕竟写作、翻译这类题目属于主观测试题型，比如第（3）（4）句还有其它不错的译法,希望广大学习者可以更好理顺句中关系、做好取舍及灵活运用。
（3） Karez reduces the evaporation of water on the ground, to which little damage is done, hence it effectively protects the natural resources and ecological environment.
（4）As a symbol of the wisdom of the harmonious coexistence between people
and nature, Karez contributes much to //makes a great contribution to human
civilization.
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